K...back to business.
so Aya said all I was going to say
Your style is really cute and all,especially the hair...(I fail to be creative in hair....)
but everything except the face are sticks, and thats not just the arms and legs. If you trace an imaginary line for the body you'll see that its just a rectangle too. Girls need boobs...guys need muscle... everyone needs an ass... (lol but seriously...)
I think sometimes the eyes are okay being far apart as a style...but in others just no.
Also imo I think its fine if one doesn't color. i didn't color digitally until I started taking drawing requests..thats about 10+ yrs of art without color...And in all some people are good with crayons, color pencils..and some aren't o3o but at the very least artists need to shade if they don't color...so try that if you haven't, it doesnt hurt to try.
Fix those 2 areas, apply again, and we'll see.