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May I?
Acceptable.
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No. Just no.
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PostSubject: Soo...   Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:19 am

Name: Sunnie
Age:12
Grade Level: 7
Grade in English: A. My grammar is accurate, and people cheat off of my tests.. >->
Stories:Underland in the Literature section.
I'll be posting another called Complete in Him soon.
I write poems short stories, and I'm the editor of Tyger's Pokemon Recover..
If you've heard. :]
Why I want to be in Story Team: I write.. Whenever I get the chance.
I like writing poems.. But I excel at writing short stories.. I also gawk at people who don't use grammar correctly.. At times.. Heh.
Writing can express many emotions, whether it's anger, happiness, sadness, etc.
I express my emotions in writing when I can.
I also like to read, unlike most people of my age.
Writing.. I don't know. I just love it.


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PostSubject: Re: Soo...   Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:59 am

Requirements are up. Update your application.

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PostSubject: Re: Soo...   Thu Oct 21, 2010 9:48 am

I love the way you write!
A DEFINITE YES from me :) <3

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PostSubject: Re: Soo...   Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:21 pm

And now, one of the two I'm eager to grade.

Let's begin, shall we?

Grammar:
-Hoho. Story Team worthy. Need I say more?

Storyline:
-Grading on Complete in Him.
-Y'know, your story just reminds me of my middle school life :P
-Sorry, back to grading lol. Anyway, your names are a bit cliche :P
-Love your style. No really, I do.
-Your story's pretty short, not much to grade on. However, I know you have talent.

Suspense:
-I don't know why, but something about your style urges me to keep reading.

Conclusion:
All in all, I like your style. However, with only one chapter (a bit short), I cannot accept. I expect a chapter or two next time. You'll definitely get accepted. Keep trying!

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