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Annie
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PostSubject: Yayy! I`m so excited! :D   Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:10 pm

Hello everyone!

I feel sort of depressed, because I`m not fond of writing english stories...
INSTEAD!
I`M A HELL OF A CHINESE-FANTASY FAG WRITER perv

Story Team Form:
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I am also translating Traditional chinese to english manga for a Manga translation group. (my current project is "Kimi ni Todoke.")




Soooooo~
Below are the links to my short stories. I`m sorry, you might not be able to find much english stories... but if you can, please read my chinese stories! ♥️





-Annie.


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PostSubject: Re: Yayy! I`m so excited! :D   Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:00 am

Requirements are up. Update your application.

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PostSubject: Re: Yayy! I`m so excited! :D   Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yayy! I`m so excited! :D   Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:30 pm

Hello Miss Annie. You're my favorite. No offense to the other applicants.

I'd like you to start a series one day. Lol.

Now, let us begin:

Grammar:
-From now on, I'm only saying good or bad grammar. You, are, good.

Storyline:
-Your short story, Too Little Too Late, will be graded.
-I like it. Awesome.
-A few issues with your choice of words:
Annie wrote:
“No, your parents strongly asked us to keep you here.” He answered immediately, “You’re suffering from brain tumor right now. Where do you think you can go?”

It should be: "No, your parents asked us". Strongly would go better with "recommend" or something. And the "he" should be lowercased.

Suspense:
-I really like it :P
-Wow..it's amazing.

Conclusion:
Again, start a story. You have amazing talent. Nice work. Welcome to the Story Team.

Off topic: YES! FINALLY DONE CLEANING UP THE APPS.

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